A few corrections.
nofri! ]nane sep`hmot! .
nane is not a true verb. It is really an adjective. So you do need to say
}ouj. Also, without a pronoun,
Sephmot is the imperative tense. In other words, you are telling someone "Thank" or "Give thanks" (better English). You need to write
]sep`hmot `ntotk.. You could get away with
Sephmot in colloquial talking, but not in proper Coptic.
]er jout `nrompi
I can tell you're translating from English. I am twenty years old, is usually written as
Ouontyi jout `nrompi. Literally, "I have 20 years"
][i`cbw `eoucyini.
This means I study from a doctor. I think you meant, I am studying medicine, which would be
][i`cbw `n]metcyini[/color]
]beri `epaima.
I am not sure if you can say
]beri because
beri is not a verb. You should use
Aierhytc `mberi `mnai. This is equivalent to the Arabic, "Bedat hena gadedan"
][i`cbw ]nis] `n`acpi `nrem`n,ymi alla ]ka] houo an.
The verb
[i`cbw needs a participle to direct us to what you're learning. You need to write
][i`cbw `e]nis] `n`acpi. The same with
ka] . You need the participle added. It should be
]ka] `nhou`o an.]ouas `ntanane `e]nou.
As described before nane is not a verb. You could say
}ouws `eernis] `e]nou. I wish to become greater more than now (also can be I wish to become better than now)
Very good work.
George
